2020-2021年 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)1

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点

注意：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥； 3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.

I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.

【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描

述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。 点睛：对立观点式 第一段：提出现象。

第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.

They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原

因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.

They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理

由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段：There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.

In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2．书面表达

假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 写作要点：

1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。 2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：

（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。 （2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。 （3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。 3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。 写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.

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___________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.

I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.

Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。 要点包括: 1. 变化是什么? 2. 变化是如何发生的? 3. 变化后有什么感受?

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending. When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.

Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面表达

根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。 基本情况 张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生 1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为…… 兴趣爱好 2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。 优秀事迹 上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程 1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师 2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：…….（举1例） 未来梦想 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.

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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 【解析】 【详解】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

5．书面表达

假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息； 3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。

The Changes in Class

Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in

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【答案】 The Changes in Class

Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.

I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us. 【解析】 【详解】

假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．书面表达

每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。 A（n） _________ I have

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A（n） toy gun I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。 写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具，描述玩具的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

7．共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。 随处可见，出行方便 诸多优势 有益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 未及时归还 占道挡路 我认为------ 参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。

8．书面表达

以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。 要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。 2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,

“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them. Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them. 【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

9． 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。 提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare

提示问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? ● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? ● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday . . Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.

The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:

First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.

Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.

What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.

If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。 3.高分亮点：

短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。 句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。

10．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。 你的烦恼 你的做法 个头不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己 父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人 学习压力大，课外活动少 ……（自主发挥，至少两点） 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.

My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.

I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。 写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。 【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。