【篇一：2013年中考英语作文案例】
how to protect yourself
self-protection is a lifelong topic. earthquakes are the most dangerous disasters because they are unpredictable. if you are outside when an earthquake happens, find an open place.
apart from tall structures, electric wires can also be dangerous. if you are in a building, hide yourself under a desk or a chair at once. don’t be afraid because the most powerful part of an earthquake lasts for only a minute. as soon as power lessens, rush to the ground carefully. you should never use lifts in this situation. actually the death rate of an earthquake is quite low and it can be still lower if you know the right methods of escaping. i wish that everybody will be safe during earthquakes. 7+8+4
believe it or not, we may confront with many accidents such as natural disaster, electric shock and so on. thus, it’s
essential for us to be careful in daily life and calm down when something happens. for example, electricity brings us
convenience, but it can also be the killer. we must remember these points to protect ourselves from danger. first, never touch the electrical appliances with wet hands. second, don’t use too much equipment at the same time, this may cause a fire. if we are more careful, we can enjoy more from what the electricity brings us and live a happier life. 8+8+3
self protection is very important in my daily life. it can prevent me from getting hurt. for example, if a fire breaks out in my apartment, i need to calm down and call “119” as soon as possible. if the rescue team can’t arrive in time, it’s wise to cover my nose and mouth with a piece of wet cloth. and it’s crucial to take the stairs instead of an elevator. only by doing things mentioned above can i get myself out of danger. 8+8+3 life is colorful but full of danger, so our students must learn some basic skills to prevent ourselves. for instance,
when a fire breaks out, i can try to put it out by myself if it isn’t very big. but if it is out of control, i must dial 119 to ask for
help immediately. i should stay calm and tell the firemen where
i live clearly. it’s not a wise choice to use the lift. i should use the stairs instead. to cut long story short, we must learn how to protect ourselves correctly, and then we can live a happier life. 8+7.5+3
peaceful as china is, we can’t emphasize the importance of safety too much. as far as i’m concerned, it’s necessary for teenagers to learn how to protect ourselves.
for example, when there is an earthquake, please calm down! it’s the most important. try to get out of the building and keep yourself from huge things. stay with others. it’s by no means frightening because you are not alone.
to put everything in a shell, if you are in danger, be brave and calm. just believe that
everyone will be safe. 8+8+3
recently so many earthquakes happened all over the world and caused many damages. it’s necessary and important for us to know how to protect myself. as far as i’m concerned, the most important thing we should do is to keep calm when an earthquake happens. if we’re at home, hide in the bathroom where has plenty of pipes because it can make sure your
safety. in addition, try to ask others for help and never give up. only in these ways can we prevent ourselves from danger.8+7+4
nowadays, people are likely to face dangerous situations. one great harm comes from natural disasters. i’d like to take an earthquake as an example to explain how to protect ourselves. first, we’re supposed to calm down when an earthquake strikes. second, stay under a piece of stable furniture so as to prevent ourselves from getting injured. more importantly, when we hear rescuers come, make some noise to catch their attention. to sum up, when we find ourselves in danger, we ought to protect ourselves or ask others for help, for we have every reason to save our own lives.8+7.5+4
it is generally assumed that protecting oneself is a must for teenagers. danger is far more than accidents in sight. when i’m online, for example, there is hidden danger, too. to prevent myself from cheating, i never give my personal information, even not to the net-pals i’ve known well. and if necessary, i change my passwords regularly. what if a net-pal ask me out? i’ll turn to my parents for help and meet the net-pal with them.
in some senses, trusting others is not suggested, especially strangers. so all in all, it’s never too much to be careful and that’s the key of protecting myself.8+7+4
as a teenager, learning how to protect myselfvery important. it’s common to meet various problems in my daily life, such as car accidents, losing my way, fire and so on. firstly, i should prevent myself from doing something dangerous. what’s more, if i can’t solve the problems by myself, i will ask others for help. parents or friends will be good choices. most importantly, if i’m in danger, i’ll calm down as sons as possible and think about how to get out of the trouble. protecting myself as much as possible, life will be better and safer! how important protecting myself is! 8+7.5+3
there is no doubt that nothing else is more precious than life, so it’s definitely important to protect myself. first of all, i never give out my personal information to strangers. second, i
seldom go to places where i’m not familiar with. it’s also wise to hang out with friends or parents instead of traveling alone, especially at night. besides, i ask the police for help if
necessary. all in all, calming down when trouble comes really plays a role. 8+7.5+4
it’s widely known that self-protection is a basic skill for
teenagers. for instance, some essential ways must be clearly kept in our mind to avoid the risk of being cheated. firstly, we should remember to keep personal information secret especially when meeting strangers. additionally, strange phone calls mustn’t be trusted without certain checks. moreover, whenever our security is threatened, asking the police for help is a good choice. in summary, only by raising the awareness of protecting ourselves can we avoid being cheated. let’s learn to protect ourselves!8+7.5 +4
nowadays, the things which are paid most attention to are teenagers’ rights and safety. due to the development of
technology, more things may fascinate teenagers deeply and eich their lives. meanwhile, teenagers are more likely to be hurt in the society---both physically and mentally. how disturbing it is!
to prevent ourselves from bad people, the following tips are needed. firstly, never talk to strangers unless it’s needed. this reduces the chances of bad people to get close to us.
secondly, never share our personal information on the internet, so that we can be safe from online criminals.
last but not least, stay calm and call the police if we find ourselves being followed by strangers.
can’t we be safer with the tips above?8+8+3
as a teenager, the most important is safety. but how can i protect myself in my daily life?
first, i can ask for help. if i play football and hurt my leg. the most useful way is call for my parents. they will take me to see a doctor.
on the other hand, keeping calm is also necessary. i will not feel worry when i am in danger. try to protect myself in a
correct way. in all, it’s important to protect myself. because the future won’t be bright without safety. 8+5.5+2
that is no denying that protect myself is very important. so we must learn how to protect myself. there are several reasons for it. to begin with, i ask neighbour for help, if my mother and my father outside. apart from the view mentioned above i
shouldn’t ask for with don’t familiar man. last but not leant i hold firm believe that nothing is more important than to protect myself in danger! 6+4+0
protecting skills is necessary in our life. some day, i watched tv at home. suddenly, i smiled something. oh! the fire was
damaging my blanket. i am so frightened and cryed. then, i told me that i should calm down. so, i fetched a lot of water and water it.
at last, i saved my house. i think when we in danger, keep calm down is important.7+4 + 0
how to protect myself? in my opinion in danger i need
protect myself. first i ask police for help me, second i may have a problem to my one of danger. third i will prevent to my father from room. i was not easy because i knew my in danger to protect myself. it’s a good idea to my opinion, at last i protect myself. 3+2+0
【篇二：上海市历届中考英语作文题目】
上海市历届中考英语作文题目
2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人
2004leave school 毕业时分
2005 growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼 2006 i have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 a story about my parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事 2008love around me 爱在我身边
2009i want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么
2010im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪 2011i’m a member of .... 我是……的一员
2012if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议
2013 how to protect myself 如何保护自己 2014 this time next year 明年此时
【篇三：上海中考英语作文】
上海中考英语作文学习资料 一.评分标准
上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。 以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准： 1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。 二. 注意点：
每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。
先划档次：a档 18~15分 b档 14.5~12分 c档 11.5~8分 d档 3.5~0分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。 三.学生常出现的问题：
1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所
以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。
2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。
3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：i must learn english well. 就可以换成：it is important for me to learn english well.
4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下un...可以用用被动语态。
6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), what’s more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。 四． 中考写作高频使用词组、句法 1.作文开头的有用句
as we all know, as it is known to all, it’s known to all that… it’s common knowledge that… it’s commonly accepted that… there is no denying that… how time flies! in a blink of an eye, time flies like a speeding arrow, time goes like the flowing water.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:on one hand, on the other hand 分两点：for one thing, for another,分三点：firstly, secondly, last but not least
3、结尾部分
all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in brief, in short, to put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说 last but not least
组织语言 发表观点的 in my opinion, from my point of view, in my eyes, as far as i am concerned, believe it or not,
表示递进的 in addition furthermore more importantlywhat’s more moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 it`s+a. for sb.to do sth. so +a./ad. thatsuch a +a.+n. that too?to do
not?.until that’s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 it’s said that +句子
4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 i firmly believe that “a foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. as a famous saying goes, “a man becomes learned by asking
questions.” it’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. an old saying goes, “nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”
五．2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦 2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人 2004 leave school毕业时分
2005 growing pains and gains成长的烦恼 2006i have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 a story about my parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事 2008 love around me 爱在我身边
2009 i want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么
2010 im proud of myself我为我自己感到自豪 2011 my favourite thing（s） 我的心爱之物
2012 if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she
cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。
2013 write at least 60 words about the topic “how to protect myself”．(以“如何保护自己”为 题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)
六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享 2009命题作文
write at least 60 words about the topic “i want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) lwhat do you want to do for your school? 2 why do you want to do it? 3 how are you going to do it?
例文1：
i want to make school clean. you may think it is very simple. but i dont think so. our teacher said, school is your home, you should keep it clean. but i have never done anything to make school clean. for example, i have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. i also threw the rubbish on the ground. so i want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. during this summer holiday, i will go to school to make school clean. of course, i will do it with my classmates. we will make school clean every weekends next term as well. now,
do you think it is simple? 2 one possible version
i want to do something for my school im leaving my school. i want to plant a tree in my school garden. i have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so i want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. if i plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. in their spare time, the students can read under the trees. 2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:im proud of myself 1、what kind of person are you?
2、what makes you proud of yourself(give an example/examples)
3、why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：1
i am a boy of less confidence. i always hate running. but as we all know, the students of grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. at that moment, i just wanted to give up. but my parents encouraged me: impossible is nothing, you could
challenge yourself! so with the encouragement of them, i tried my best to run and insisted on running. when i got to the
finishing line, i felt proud of myself, though i didnt get the good mark, i knew, i won. i created a miracle for myself and i was so proud of myself!
2. i am proud of myself
the wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. by looking backwards, i’m so proud of myself because i’ve
grown into a strong-minded person. it was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. at first, i felt my body was filled with energy. as time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. for many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. but the saying “accumulated water
becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. though the power of one step seemed so weak, i insisted on climbing to the top. when i succeeded, i felt i had reached a new height in my life. how proud i’m of being a strong-minded person.
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