高中写作高级词汇(例句展示)

Writing 高级词汇

原则一：\" \" 弃旧取新\" \" 原则

阅卷老师偏爱\"学得晚\"的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现学生\"学

以致用\"的意识。例如，表示\"美丽的\"形容词，同学们首先想到的是初中词汇

beautiful，用高中词汇 appealing，attractive，charming 和 fascinating 等

来替换 beautiful，可以为书面表达提分不少。

原则二： \" \" 短语优先\" \" 原则

高考书面表达中，多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。

例如，first 可用 to begin / start with 替换;besides 可以用 in addition

和 what is more 替换;consider 可以用 take sth.into consideration/account

替换;remember 可以用 keep in mind 替换。

原则三：\" \" 避免重复\" \" 原则

同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达，就要尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单

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词。例如，反复使用 should，这时考生应该充分发散思维，灵活地运用短语 be

supposed to 和 had better 等进行替换。

第 1 组：代替 important 的高级词汇

〔简单〕Education is very important.

〔高级〕Education is of much/vital/great importance.

〔简单〕The work he does is very important.

〔高级〕The work he does is absolutely vital.

〔简单〕A balanced diet is very important for us.

〔高级〕A balanced diet is absolutely essential for everyone.

〔简单〕Money is the only thing that’s important to him.

〔高级〕Money is the only thing that matters to him.

〔简单〕First impressions are very important.

〔高级〕First impressions really do count.

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〔简单〕Parents are important in children’s learning.

〔 高 级 〕 Parents play an important role/part in children ’s

learning.

〔简单〕Children’s education is very important for Chinese

parents.

〔高级〕Chinese parents attach much importance to children’

s education.

〔简单〕It’s very important for parents to be honest with their

children.

〔高级〕It’s very vital/essential for parents to be honest with

their children.

第 2 组：代替 good 的高级词汇

〔简单〕He is a good football player.

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〔高级〕He is an amazing football player.

〔简单〕This is a very good place.

〔高级〕This is a fantastic place, really beautiful.

〔简单〕The view from my bedroom window was very good.

〔高级〕The view from my bedroom window was absolutely

breathtaking.

〔简单〕This is a very good opportunity to learn about American

culture.

〔高级〕This is a unique opportunity to learn about American

culture.

〔简单〕The school's examination results were very good.

〔高级〕The school's examination results were very impressive.

〔简单〕The food was very good and we had a wonderful night.

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〔高级〕The food was superb and we had a wonderful night.

（superb：杰出的，极好的）

〔简单〕The staff are doing a good job.

〔高级〕The staff are doing a splendid job.（splendid：辉煌的，

灿烂的，极好的）

〔简单〕I can't stand him, but my wife thinks he’s very good.

〔高级〕I can't stand him, but my wife thinks he’s marvelous.

（marvelous：非凡的，不可思议的）

〔简单〕You look very good in that dress.

〔高级〕You look absolutely gorgeous in that dress!

第 3 组：代替 cause/make 的高级词汇

〔简单〕His actions could make him lose his job.

〔高级〕His actions could lead to him losing his job.（lead to sb

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doing sth：导致某人做某事）

〔简单〕The accident caused two passengers to die.

〔高级〕The accident resulted in the death of two passengers.

〔简单〕There are several reasons for the strange phenomenon.

〔 高 级 〕 Several reasons may account for the strange

phenomenon.（account for：对...做出解释）

〔简单〕The floods caused the deaths of over a hundred people.

〔高级〕The floods were responsible for the deaths of over a

hundred people.

〔简单〕Daily shaving can cause a number of skin problems.

〔 高 级 〕 Daily shaving can give rise to a number of skin

problems.（give rise to：引起，导致）

〔简单〕We are still dealing with problems caused by your

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mistake.

〔高级〕We are still dealing with problems resulting from your

mistake.

第 4 组：代替 because of 的高级词汇

〔简单〕We've reached our goal because of your great help.

〔高级〕We've reached our goal, thanks to your great help.

〔简单〕Because the money isn’t enough, the project will not

continue next year.

〔高级〕Owing to a lack of funds, the project will not continue

next year.

〔简单〕Because of the pilots' strike, all flights have had to be

cancelled.

〔高级〕As a result of the pilots' strike, all flights have had to be

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cancelled.

〔简单〕The fishes in the river have died because of water

pollution.

〔高级〕The fishes in the river have died as a consequence

of water pollution.

〔简单〕The restaurant's success was mainly because of its new

manager.

〔高级〕The restaurant's success was due largely to its new

manager.

第 5 组：代替 very 的高级词汇

〔简单〕Self-confidence is very important to our success.

〔高级〕Self-confidence is absolutely vital to our success.

〔简单〕Earthquakes are very difficult to predict.

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〔高级〕Earthquakes are extremely difficult to predict.

〔简单〕His mother is a very successful politician.

〔高级〕His mother is a highly successful politician.

〔简单〕His attitude is very important to its success.

〔高级〕Its success will depend to a large extent on his attitude.

（to a large extent：在很大程度上）

〔简单〕She looks very beautiful tonight.

〔 高 级 〕 She looks extraordinarily beautiful tonight.

（extraordinarily：非常，格外的）

〔简单〕Conditions have improved a lot over the past few years

〔高级〕Conditions have improved considerably over the past

few years.（considerably：相当，非常）

〔简单〕Raising money for the homeless has been very difficult.

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〔 高 级 〕 Raising money for the homeless has

been incredibly difficult.（incredibly：难以置信地，很）

第 6 组：表达“对…有好处”的高级词汇

〔简单〕The visit to European universities will be good for us.

〔高级〕We will benefit greatly from the visit to European

universities.

〔简单〕We should work together to help the whole community.

〔 高 级 〕 We should worker together to benefit the whole

community.

〔简单〕A bit more exercise would be good for you.

〔高级〕A bit more exercise would do you good.

〔简单〕It's useless to tell him --- he won't listen.

〔高级〕It's no good telling him --- he won't listen.

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〔简单〕The summer course can make students’oral English

become better.

〔高级〕The summer course can improve students’oral English.

第 7 组：表达“对…坏处”的高级词汇

〔简单〕Modern farming is very bad for the countryside.

〔 高 级 〕 Modern farming have done much harm to the

countryside.

〔简单〕These chemicals is very bad for the environment.

〔高级〕These chemicals have caused serious damage to the

environment.

〔简单〕Smoking can be very bad for your health.

〔高级〕Smoking can severely damage your health.

〔简单〕The fire was very bad for the school.

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〔高级〕The school was completely destroyed in the fire.

〔简单〕Alcohol and drugs were very bad for his career.

〔高级〕Alcohol and drugs almost ruined his career.

〔简单〕I want you to have fun.

〔高级〕I don't want to spoil your fun.（spoil：溺爱，毁掉）

第 8 组：表示“大小多少”的高级词汇

〔简单〕My new job will be a big challenge.

〔高级〕My new job will be a tremendous challenge.（巨大的）

〔简单〕More and more Americans are curious about Chinese

culture.

〔高级〕An increasing number of Americans are curious about

Chinese culture.

〔简单〕The shortage of teachers is a big problem.

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〔高级〕The shortage of teachers poses a major problem.

（poses a major problem：构成重大问题）

〔简单〕We have made some small changes to the program.

〔高级〕We have made some minor changes to the program.

（minor：较小的）

〔简单〕Most of the students are short-sighted.

〔高级〕The majority of the students are short-sighted.

〔简单〕The policy benefits only a small group of people in the

country.

〔 高 级 〕 The policy benefits only a small minority of the

country's population.

第 9 组：devote 替换 spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

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He devotes all his spare time to reading.

第 10 组：average 替换 ordinary

I’m an average(ordinary) student.

第 11 组：but 替换 very

The film we saw last night was very interesting. →

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

第 12 组：seat 替换 sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated(sitting) by

the road, looking worried.

第 13 组：suppose 替换 should

He is supposed to(should) have driven more slowly.

第 14 组：appreciate 替换 thank

Thank you very much for your help. →

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We appreciate your help very much.

第 15 组：the case 替换 true

I don’t think it is the case(true).

第 16 组：on 替换 as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research. →

On his arrival, he began his research.

第 17 组：due to 替换 because of

He arrived late due to(because of) the storm.

第 18 组：cover 替换 walk/read

After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.

第 19 组：contribute to 替换 be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.

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Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English

study.

第 20 组：round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner(coming soon). Do

you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner(nearby).

第 21 组：come to light 替换 discover

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost

jewels. →

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

第 22 组：have a ball 替换 have a good time/ enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one

of us had a ball(had a good time).

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第 23 组：come up with 替换 think of

Jack is very clever. He often comes up with (thinks of) new

ideas.

第 24 组：set aside 替换 save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their

pocket money for books.

第 25 组：be of + n. 替换 adj.

The products are of high quality (very good) and are sold

everywhere in China.

第 26 组：refer to 替换 talk about/of，mention

The professor you referred to(talked about ) is very famous.

第 27 组：lest 替换 so that /in order that

I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it.

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→

I wrote down his telephone number lest I forget it.

第 28 组：be caught up in...

be crazy about...

be absorbed in...

be addicted to...

替换 be interested in

He is caught up in (interested in) collecting stamps.

第 29 组：more than 替换 very

I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. →

I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.

第 30 组：perfect(ly) 替换 good/ very well

He speaks perfect(good) English./ He speaks English

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perfectly(very well).

第 31 组：do sb. a favor 替换 help

Would you please do me a favor(help me) to turn down the

radio?

第 32 组：in the course of 替换 during

In the course of(During) the mountain-climbing, please help

each other and pay special attention to your safety.

第 33 组：the majority of 替换 most

The majority of(Most of) the interviewees prefer watching TV at

home to going to the cinema.

第 34 组：consist of 替换 be made up of

Our class consists of (is made up of) 50 students.

第 35 组：be worn out 替换 be tired / broken

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① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).

② My shoes are worn out(broken). Please buy me a new pair.

第 36 组：attend to 替换 look after

第 37 组：on condition that 替换 as long as

第 38 组：nevertheless 替换 however

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